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***Promote yourself with a “10 reasons” mailing***
During his 1/11/07 tele-seminar on “Thriving as a Freelance
Copywriter” with Peter Bowerman, white paper writing guru
Michael Stelzner told how he got clients at the beginning
of his freelance career.
He simply mailed potential clients a sheet of paper with
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Example: Mary Smith is a freelancer who wants to write
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***Hidden danger of blogging***
Here’s one more drawback to blogging I did not anticipate
in my new book, “Blog, Schmog: What Blogging Can and Can’t
Do For Your Business.”
AL, a copywriter, had posted several comments on *my*
copywriting blog ? then, months later, asked me to remove
Reasons: when people searched his name online, his comments
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***Best day to send e-mail?***
According to a new survey by eROI, Inc., high-level
executives read most of their e-mail messages on Mondays
and Tuesdays. Best time to send messages on those days:
during lunch hour.
Source: What’s Working in Sales Management, 1/10/07, p. 4.
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April 15 is fast-approaching. And in all likelihood, you’re
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Turns out, 3 out of 4 people do exactly that.
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***”Reverse-research” your marketing copy***
You come across a great fact in a competitor’s promo. Can
you use it in yours? Yes and no.
No, in that all facts and claims in copy must be well
documented ? and marketing materials are not an acceptable
Yes, in that you can “reverse research” the fact: Google
the information. Find an original source.
Note: The numbers and dates in the online article may be
different than the ones you read in the promotion. Use what
you found online, and credit the online source.
***Must-attend Webinar: Herschell Gordon Lewis on the art
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***Are people impressed by your messy desk?***
Do you keep your desk deliberately messy to impress others
? to convey the image that you are busy, productive, and
If so, stop: a study by the University of Texas found that
people with messy offices are less efficient, less
organized, and less imaginative than people with clean
Career consultant Penelope Trunk notes: “A messy desk sends
the message that you cannot handle your position, and that
assignments and important paper will go into a pile and
never come out.”
Trunk concludes: “Even if you get every project done well,
the perception will be that you don’t.”
Source: “Words from Woody,” Winter 2007, p. 7.
***7-point checklist for writing stronger headlines***
Clayton Makepeace, arguably the most successful freelance
copywriter on the planet, suggests asking these 7 questions
about the headline you’ve just written:
1. Does your headline touch a nerve?
2. Does it make a unique claim or statement?
3. Does it provoke curiosity?
4. Is it credible?
5. It is specific?
6. Does it have a news element?
7. Does it offer a compelling benefit for reading?
Source: Clayton Makepeace teleconference, 12/20/06.
***Upcoming speaking engagement***
I’ll be presenting a full-day copywriting seminar at the
Iowa Chapter of the International Association of Business
Communicators (IABC) on March 7 in Des Moines, Iowa. To
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***Quotation of the month***
“Nobody ever sold anybody anything by appealing to their
–Richard Armstrong, copywriter
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