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***A formula for writing stronger subject lines***
To improve your chances of getting your e-mails read by your
customers, get the meat of the message in the subject line.
The formula: subject + verb + object.
Too vague: Shipment coming.
Better: Blender parts shipped today.
Source: Customer Service Advantage, 10/19/07, p. 3.
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***Is “click here now” old hat for Web pages?***
Adam Lasnik from Google says you can raise your site’s ranking
in Google by using descriptive key words in links.
Example: Instead of “click here now,” hyperlink the call to
action to a key word or phrase, e.g., “red widget.”
Lasnik also advises marketers to avoid using keywords
repetitively. Instead, he recommends focusing on just one or two
keyword concepts per page.
Source: DMA SEM Certification Program.
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***5 most important marketing metrics***
According to a Direct Marketing Association (DMA) study, the
most important metrics to measure – online and offline – are
sales, leads, revenues, response rates, and profits.
Among the least important: brand awareness and perception.
The study found that email and web sites had highest ROI. The
lowest ROI was mobile marketing.
Source: Levey, Richard, “Money Talks,” Direct, 10/07, pp. 27-28.
***Know where prospects are in their buying cycles***
According to Gary Elley of KeywordMarketer.com, you can tell
where your prospects are in the buying cycle by looking at the
key words they search.
“Those at the beginning of the buying cycle tend to search with
keywords and phrases that are one to three words long and
describe the niche in generic terms,” says Gary. These prospects
should be sent to pages giving them detailed product
On the other hand, prospects nearer to making a purchase
decision search with more specific terms and phrases including
brand names, models, or product numbers. These prospects should
be sent to a page where they can order the product.
Source: The Marketing Minute, 11/14/07,
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***What a Nathan’s hot dog can teach you about marketing***
When Nathan Handwerker opened his first hot dog stand in Coney
Island, sales were slow, despite the price of a hot dog being
just a nickel.
Reason: the public believed rumors that hot dogs were made from
tainted beef, and stayed away.
Solution: Nathan hired good-looking young college men to stand
around his cart eating hot dogs. He had each student wear a
white lab coat and a stethoscope.
The public “ate it up.” They believed that these “customers”
were doctors, and if doctors were eating Nathan’s hot dogs, it
must be healthy. Sales skyrocketed.
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Why do so many fast-food chains push their super-size meals?
Because larger sizes command higher prices. Yet the increase in
cost of goods is minimal, resulting in fatter profit margins.
Example: when Starbucks eliminated the 8-ounce size, the new
“small” — a 10-ounce cup — increased profits by 25% per cup.
Added cost of product? Only 2 cents per cup.
Source: Fast Company, 11/07, p. 40.
***Quotation of the month***
“Ignorance is no crime. To call somebody ignorant is no insult.
All of us are ignorant of most of what there is to know. If I
tell somebody who believes the world is 6,000 years old that is
he ignorant, I am paying him the compliment of assuming that he
is not stupid or insane.”
Source: Scientific American, 7/07, p. 89.
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