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***Do you measure this important e-mail metric?***
Measuring open and click-through rates can show you just how
successful your e-mail marketing campaigns are.
But on the flip side, there’s another metric you should measure:
the “complaint rate.” And if it’s too high, you could be in
Complaint rate is the percentage of recipients receiving your
e-mail who complain to their ISP that you are spamming them.
According to e-mail deliverability expert Kevin Senne, the
complaint rate should not exceed 0.2% — meaning a maximum of 2
spam complaints per 1,000 e-mails broadcast.
Warning: a number of e-mail services will refuse to distribute
e-mails to your list if your complaint rate exceeds 0.2% or even
To lower your complaint rate to acceptable levels:
>> Make your e-mail copy more content-heavy … and less
>> Ask subscribers what they want to read in your e-mails – and
give it to them.
>> E-mail your list less frequently.
Source: The Marketing Report, 7/7/08, p. 1.
***Are you over or under-staffed?***
According to consultant Don Libey, multi-channel merchants
(catalogers, e-commerce businesses, retailers, direct marketers)
should generate at least $375,000 in annual sales per employee
(that includes the business owner).
If you’re a small SOHO or mom-and-pop with low overhead and a
lean operation, I think even $200,000 per employee is
That means if you are a solopreneur earning $75,000 a year, you
haven’t reached the level of revenues where you can justify
hiring an employee.
A SOHO with sales of $300,000 a year, by contrast, can afford to
hire a part-time worker (say 20 hours a week).
I’m all for delegating and outsourcing, which can increase your
own productivity and earning potential.
But based on Libey’s ratio, don’t overhire – like a local
company I read about with half a million in gross annual sales
and 17 employees.
If the worker-to-sales ratio is too high, all your profits will
go to others – in the form of paychecks – and not enough to you,
the business owner.
You’ll essentially be working, operating a business, and taking
risk just to give your employees a job.
Source: Libey Economic Outlook, 7/08, p. 4.
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***Writing is good for the soul – and your immune system***
Improving your writing skills can make you money. Now a study at
Tufts-New England Medical Center says it may also improve your
Of 234 cancer patients monitored in the study, those who did
narrative writing about how the cancer affected them showed less
pain and greater well-being than those who did not.
Source: Daily News, 7/19/08, p.17.
***The “Bible” of writing for the Web***
Too many copywriting courses are focused on writing hard-sell,
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information products, as if that’s the only thing being
advertised on the Web today. But the vast majority of Web copy
being written today is for conventional multi-page corporate
Few copywriters are as experienced in Web copy as my friend Nick
Usborne, and certainly no one teaches how to write for business
Web sites better. If you want to write Web copy for conventional
companies like IBM and Verizon, and not people selling ‘get rich
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***Quotation of the month***
“There’s too much information in today’s world, and our defense
mechanism to sort through it all is to vote with our gut, to
vote what we feel. We look for shortcuts, and those shortcuts
are called brands. The reason you buy Tide detergent at the
grocery store is that you don’t want to read fifty labels. You
trust Tide because you already know it works.”
Source: “The Likeability Factor” (Crown Publishers, 2005, p.
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