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***A simple rule of thumb for copy length***
When deciding whether you need long copy or short – whether in a
landing page, e-mail, or sales letter – follow this simple rule:
short copy for generating leads, longer copy for generating
“As a general proposition, an ad in which you are seeking only
inquiries should be short, merely leading the reader down to the
free booklet and the coupon,” writes copywriter Robert Collier,
“whereas an ad in which you are attempting to make the actual
sale should be long enough to tell all about your offer.
“Some authorities will tell you to write only short, crisp ads,
with plenty of white space – others to crowd in every word you
can get. Both are wrong. There is no hard and fast rule as to
how long an ad should be, except that it should be long enough
to tell your story, but short enough to hold your reader’s
Source: Collier, Robert, “How to Make Money at Home in Spare
Time by Mail,” p. 154.
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***Viral marketing on overdrive***
According to David Meerman Scott, author of the “New Rules of
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He cites as an example an e-book he offered free, with no
registration required, that has been downloaded 250,000 times.
Therefore, Scott advises you to drive traffic to an “ungated”
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download the content) instead of a “gated” landing page where
they must fill out a form first and submit their e-mail address
before gaining access to your content.
“So many companies create great content and then put a gate on
it and restrict the number of people who read it,” he says.
“It’s sad, really. Yeah, they build 500 people in a list, but
they could have had 10,000 people exposed to their ideas.”
An even better idea: include a strong “bounce back” offer (e.g.,
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If 10% of the 250,000 people who downloaded Scott’s offer had
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***3 ways to optimize HTML e-mail for image blocking***
If you send HTML e-mail marketing messages, your recipient’s
e-mail reader may be blocking the images. So take these 3 simple
steps to make sure your HTML e-mail message still makes
sense even if the images are stripped away:
1—Add alt tags (descriptors) to images in the e-mail, so when
images are blocked, the recipient can read a description of the
2—Add a “click to view” link on the pre-header text.
3—Minimize images above the fold (in the first screen of the
Source: SIPA Hotline, 7/28/08, p. 3.
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“I used to be so convinced that happiness was the goal, yet all
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