SUBJECT: Spend the weekend with Bob Bly and direct-mail giant Boardroom Inc. Exclusive Copywriter's Retreat with Bob Bly and Boardroom Inc. You're invited to receive very private, very direct guidance from Bob Bly -- a $500,000- a-year copywriter. You'll also get three chances to get your toe in the door of direct-mail powerhouse Boardroom Inc. (They mail 50 million pieces every year!) You'll learn a ton of high-level marketing and copywriting secrets ... You'll learn how to get more clients than you ever dreamed possible ... You'll learn how to write more powerful copy than 99% of the other freelance copywriters out there... And, you'll have a whole lot of fun! ***** I'm hosting a very small, very exclusive event in April, and I'd like to invite you to join me. Here's the scoop ... AWAI had an idea recently about how to get copywriters on a very fast track. A new and unique approach that brings together a small group of dedicated copywriting students with a client who is looking for writers. The idea was to take a core group of students and focus on a few extremely powerful copywriting secrets that are not normally taught in the regular or masters AWAI Copywriting programs, to explore them in depth, and apply them to specific situations. And that's when we heard from Brian Kurtz, Executive VP and 24-year veteran of Boardroom Inc. Boardroom was founded by Martin Edelston with start-up capital of $3,000 and a promotion written by Gene Schwartz with the headline "Now You Can Read 300 Business Magazines in 30 Minutes and Get the Guts of Every One in a Form You Can't Forget." Today, Boardroom is one of the most successful direct-response newsletter and book publishers in the country -- mailing 50 million pieces a year. Boardroom is also a "diamond" client, sought after by every serious direct-response copywriter because (a) they appreciate and depend on great copy and (b) they are always looking for freelance copywriters who can help them generate more sales. Brian came to AWAI a month or so ago with a request: he has 3 separate products for which Boardroom wants to test new promotions. They want to spend a few days hunkered down with writers, brainstorming ways to break their advertising through to a new level. Brian wants to come away with at least two or three promos for each product. That's six to nine different promotions. And they're happy to pay a fee for each promo they test. "Brian," I said, "it's funny you should bring this up. We recently did something very similar ... a copywriting Bootcamp that brought together AWAI students with Agora Health, a publisher of healthcare newsletters and books. "The client got several great ads out of the retreat, and gave paying assignments to 1/3 of the AWAI students who attended. Why don't we create something similar for you?" "Bob," he said, "you're on." And that brings us to where we are today. What I'm talking about is unlike anything that's offered elsewhere -- including our yearly copywriting Bootcamp. In fact, it's not really a seminar at all. It's a copywriter's retreat -- with actual assignments to work on. That's why it's taking place in a very private, very exclusive environment. We're going to send this invitation only to small sections of our student file at one time, because we are concerned that it will sell out very quickly. (In fact, it's quite possible that it will already be sold out by the time you read this. If so, please don't be upset.) You see, I can do just one or two of these retreats each year. That's how much preparation and work will go into it. And it's going to be a very intensive effort for me, because I'm going to give each of you a great deal of attention. You're not just going to be one in a crowd. That's what makes the potential rewards so great. So, here's the situation: On April 14 - 17, a small group of copywriters (no more than 20) are going to meet at the Marriott Hotel located across the street from Boardroom's headquarters in Stamford, CT. I will be hosting the event and personally working with all the copywriters who attend. David Deutsch, one of Boardroom's top freelance copywriters, will be there to share his views on how to write winning promotions for Boardroom newsletters and books. And to work with you on your copy. If you asked me to make a list of the 5 best ... and most successful ... freelance DM copywriters working today, David would most certainly be on that list. And not at the bottom, either! One of Boardroom's favorite graphic artists, Lori Haller -- a popular presenter at the AWAI Bootcamp -- will be there too. Lori is one of the top designers in the business today. Brian says she has a natural instinct about design and text - she knows when a designer needs to go outrageous or be more subdued. I have worked on numerous projects with Lori. Between us, we will show you how you and the designer can work together more effectively -- to produce winners for your clients. And the Boardroom team - Brian Kurtz, Executive Vice President, Michele Wolk, Creative Director, Rita Shankewitz, Marketing Director, and other Boardroom creative experts - Carman Suarez, Mary Kostyk, Benedette Knopik and others will be there, with samples of the 3 products for which they need promotions. You'll be able to work on any or all of these 3 spec assignments. If Boardroom likes what they see, you may be given the opportunity to write a full promotion for them ... and they will pay for any promotions they decide to test! And here's the "glicken" ... the icing on the cake ... Martin Edelston -- legendary direct marketer and founder of Boardroom -- will be there on Sunday morning to share some of the secrets that helped him build Boardroom from an idea in his head into the direct-marketing powerhouse it is today ... as well as personally answer your questions. Marty, now at an age when many men retire, could certainly afford to do so ... but he doesn't, because he is having too much fun. However, he almost never goes to DM events or speaks at conferences anymore -- so this is a rare opportunity for you to learn at the feet of the master firsthand. --------------------------------------------- A Once-In-A-Lifetime Career Opportunity ----------------------------------------------- If your pulse isn't pounding with excitement at the thought of having this once-in-a-lifetime opportunity to write for Boardroom, let me be clear about why joining us at this retreat may be the most important business decision of your copywriting career. In direct response, there are only a handful of diamond clients ... companies that the top freelance copywriters all want to write for. These diamond clients live and die by the quality of their promo copy. So they pay for ... and mail ... only the very best and strongest copy. There are only about half a dozen or so true diamond clients in all of direct marketing: Agora ... Phillips ... Rodale ...KCI... Weiss Research ...Soundview and, of course, Boardroom. Boardroom mails more than 50 million pieces of direct mail annually to promote its 20+ newsletters, books, and annuals. Most of their promotions are magalogs for information products in health, taxes, money saving, business, and related areas ... long-copy promotions requiring the highest degree of copywriting skill and expertise. Boardroom assigns approximately 40 DM packages to various freelance copywriters each year -- and the fees they pay are the most generous in the industry. It literally took me 20 years in the copywriting business to get a shot at writing for Boardroom ... that's how tough a nut Boardroom is to crack! But by signing up for this one-time-only AWAI writer's retreat, you get a shot at writing for Boardroom years, even decades, earlier in your career than I did ... even if you've never freelanced for any other client before. That opportunity to work on these 3 spec assignments for Boardroom is guaranteed to the first 20 AWAI students to respond to this invitation. And knowing how smart and ambitious you guys are, I expect the phone here at AWAI will be ringing off the hook as soon as this message hits our students' email inboxes. So, to ensure your place at the Boardroom retreat, call Barb or Scott at 866-879-2924. Or click here now: http://www.awaionline.com/boardroom/bb49 By the way, preparing for this retreat is so labor- intensive ... both for us and for Boardroom ... that Brian told me confidentially, "Even if we get great copy from the AWAI students, Bob, I don't know that we'll ever have time to do this again." So, this Boardroom Bootcamp is truly a unique opportunity for you to get a foot in the door with the most prestigious client in DM ... and once it's over, it is unlikely we will ever repeat it again. -------------------------------------------------------- Here's The Preliminary Agenda For What May Be The Most Important Copywriting Opportunity Of Your Career -------------------------------------------------------- We'll meet at the Marriott Hotel in Stamford, CT. The hotel is across the street from both Boardroom's headquarters and the Stamford Mall. To save you money, we've negotiated a special rate of $109 per night plus tax for our participants (discounted from the regular room rate at this time of year). The retreat kicks off with a Welcome Reception from 6 to 7 p.m. on Thursday, April 14. Dinner is available at any of the hotel's restaurants or at the Stamford Mall, right across the street. Afterward, I'll be around for hours to talk to you personally. On Friday, April 15, we'll provide a complimentary buffet breakfast, starting at 8 a.m., to be held in Boardroom's conference room. At 9 a.m. sharp, we get to work. First off, Brian and his core team will give you the Boardroom assignments. They'll talk about each product's USP, its hot points, their prospect, past promo efforts, their competition, where the promo will run, and more. They'll talk about the overall marketing strategies that have worked for Boardroom over the years. Next, we'll go over the Core Desire of the prospect, the 4 U's, and several approaches to copywriting projects -- including the Boardroom style, format, "fascinations," and more. We'll talk about how to hook your prospect ... and we'll start talking about the approaches and copy styles that would work best for Boardroom products. Then before we break for lunch, we'll tour the Boardroom facility. This is a rare chance to get a firsthand look at a major direct-response operation. (You don't need a car; it's less than a block from the hotel to their office.) With luck, you'll get to meet and shake hands with some of the top Boardroom marketing staff -- the people who may be calling on you soon to handle a lucrative copywriting assignment for them! We'll have a lunch break from 12 to 1. Lunch is available at a number of restaurants in the hotel, the mall, and nearby. You'll be free to go on your own or in groups. After lunch, you're going to start writing. You'll work on headlines and openings (the first three to five paragraphs) for your promo. Then, we'll break into 2 or 3 groups in order to do peer reviews on everyone's copy -- and ratchet it up to breakthrough levels. We'll come back together for a panel review -- where we'll cover questions, hot tips, and do a further analysis of how to write a winner, Boardroom style. By the end of the day, you'll know more about Boardroom's products, marketing approach, and copy style than 99% of the working copywriters in the country! On Saturday, there's another complimentary buffet breakfast -- and we get to work at 8 a.m. Make sure you've had a good night's sleep, because we're going to hit the ground running. We'll start with feedback from Brian on what you've done so far. Then, we're back into techniques and secrets ... Emotion, research techniques, "golden nuggets," the "halo effect," and more. Plus, we'll investigate the space requirements of writing for information products and how to keep your copy from meandering off the path and running out of steam. I'll talk about how to close the promo and make sure you cover the all-important "little details" -- critical secrets like the "tipping point" and "drop in the bucket." We'll break for lunch and then it's back to work again ... You'll write the body copy for the first page or two of your promo -- and punch up your headlines and leads. Brian and I will be available to consult with as you work. Then, it's back to peer reviews to evaluate what you've done and brainstorm ways to make your promo even better. We'll wrap up the day with another panel session to answer questions -- and then we'll break for dinner. Dinner will be at one of the Stamford area's hotspots ... and it's on me! We'll have good food and drink, sit around a table, and talk about copywriting, marketing, freelancing ... or just shoot the breeze. Sunday, April 25th, we'll have another complimentary buffet breakfast -- a little later this time. We'll meet at 9 a.m. and go till noon. On Sunday, I will lead several bonus sessions never before presented at any AWAI event. And that includes the great Marty Edelston, the legendary direct marketer who never speaks to groups anymore. But he'll be there with us - to talk with you! Other bonus sessions include "The 1-Hour E-Zine Writing Formula," where I'll show you the formula I use for creating and distributing my free e-zine "The Direct Response Letter" -- a (practically) free self-promotion that generates thousands of dollars in assignments every month. Another bonus session, "What's Working in Email Copywriting Today," is an intensive overview on how to apply AWAI copywriting principles to email marketing campaigns. And last but not least, members of the Boardroom team and I will review the copy you've written. I have to warn you: The Boardroom folks pull no punches. But no one knows more about writing killer copy for info products -- and their sharp critiques will enable you to take your Boardroom promo to the next level. That will be the official end of the retreat. Remember, Boardroom is going to pay a fee for any promo they decide to test. It will be modest -- but if your ideas are selected, you'll have your foot in the door with a major publisher. And that may result in opportunities for future assignments. Having Boardroom as a client so early in your copywriting career will open more doors than you can imagine. When prospects ask who you've written for and you can list Boardroom, they'll instantly be persuaded to give you a try. One more thing: You can bring anything you want to work on to the retreat -- any assignment or project you might have -- and I'll be glad to help you with it. Okay, down to the nitty gritty. The cost. As I said earlier, this invitation is for a limited, very private, very exclusive retreat. When we ran this event by Michael Masterson and asked him what we should charge, he said, "When I was starting out like our AWAI students, I would have happily paid $50,000 to learn from these guys." Michael pointed out that Marty, Brian, and David would charge something like $10,000 or more to come in and teach you copywriting for just one day ... if you could hire them at all. (And you can't.) But, of course, we don't expect you to pay $50,000 ... or $10,000 ... or even $5,000 to attend this Bootcamp. No. The fee to attend this Boardroom Bootcamp is $2,450, which comes to about $816 a day for this training. Travel, room fees, and any meals other than those I specified are your responsibility. Not cheap, I know. But a drop in the bucket compared to the value ... and opportunity ... you will receive during these 3 very special days. You're a working (or studying) copywriter. So I'm not going to go on and on with a standard close like "A program like this is well worth ... etc. etc." I think you already know what it's worth. If you do, your pulse is pounding. If you don't, it's not. Plain and simple. So ... the price is the price. If I didn't think it was a good value for all you're getting, I wouldn't be putting my name on it. If you want in, here's what you have to do: Step One: You have to register for this exclusive retreat immediately. We're accepting only 20 people. So it's first come, first served. I recommend you call Barb or Scott today at 866-879-2924 or click the following link to reserve your spot: http://www.awaionline.com/boardroom/bb49 Step Two: Once you've registered for the retreat, you have to call the Stamford Marriott at 203-357-9555 and tell them you are part of the American Writers and Artists Institute group. Be sure you make your reservations early as the cut-off date for our in-house discount is March 31st. Step Three: Make your travel arrangements. If you need assistance with flights, please contact Agora Travel at 800-926-6575. Step Four: We'll send you all the preparatory material for the retreat, so when you arrive you'll be ready to go. We'll also send you any additional materials that Brian wants you to have. We're going to hit the ground running, and we want you to have your track shoes on. Step Five: Show up. That's it. This promises to be a very exciting professional copywriter's retreat. You'll learn a ton of top-level copywriting techniques from me, David, and Brian ... and get to pick our brains for hours on end. You'll also have the opportunity to get one or more paying assignments ... and your foot in the door of this major publisher. But remember: There are only 20 slots, and people are already talking about coming just based on the rumors that have gotten out to our students and associates. So, please, act immediately if you want to participate. Reserve your place right now! To register, call Barb or Scott at 866-879-2924 or simply click here: http://www.awaionline.com/boardroom/bb49 Hope to see you there. Best regards, Bob Bly Copywriter 22 East Quackenbush Avenue Dumont, NJ 07628 Phone (201) 385-1220 Fax (201) 385-1138 email: rwbly@bly.com P.S. The first 10 people to register will receive a copy of the classic marketing book "Breakthrough Advertising" -- published by Boardroom and written by their top copywriter of all time, Gene Schwartz -- absolutely FREE! (This gift has a retail value of almost $100!) So register today: http://www.awaionline.com/boardroom/bb49