{"id":1138,"date":"2017-03-21T09:25:27","date_gmt":"2017-03-21T14:25:27","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/bly.com\/blog\/?p=1138"},"modified":"2017-03-15T09:25:59","modified_gmt":"2017-03-15T14:25:59","slug":"is-your-participle-dangling","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.bly.com\/blog\/writing\/is-your-participle-dangling\/","title":{"rendered":"Is your participle dangling?"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>While channel surfing, I came across a horror movie, and the<br \/>\ndescription at the bottom of the screen read:<\/p>\n<p>&#8220;Stranded in the countryside, a monstrous scarecrow terrorizes a<br \/>\ngroup of teens.&#8221;<\/p>\n<p>This is one of the most common grammar mistakes, and it is called<br \/>\na dangling participle or dangling modifier.<\/p>\n<p>The first part of the sentence &#8212; &#8220;stranded in the countryside&#8221; &#8212;<br \/>\nmodifies or describes a noun in the second part of the sentence.<\/p>\n<p>In this example, it is obviously the teens who are stranded and<br \/>\nbeing terrorized by the scarecrow.<\/p>\n<p>We know this because if the teens were not stranded, they could<br \/>\njust leave and avoid the monster.<\/p>\n<p>The sentence should read: &#8220;Stranded in the countryside, a group<br \/>\nof teens is terrorized by a monstrous scarecrow.&#8221;<\/p>\n<p>The dangling modifier is a common mistake in the lead paragraph<br \/>\nof business letters.<\/p>\n<p>For instance, here is the opening of a letter written by a sales<br \/>\nrep to warehouse managers, selling an inventory control software<br \/>\nsystem.<\/p>\n<p>It begins, &#8220;As a warehouse manager, I know inventory control is<br \/>\ncritical to your success.&#8221;<\/p>\n<p>This is wrong because it says the letter writer &#8212; &#8220;I&#8221; &#8212; is a<br \/>\nwarehouse manager, which he is not.<\/p>\n<p>The correct grammar would be: &#8220;As a warehouse manager, you know<br \/>\nthat inventory control is critical to your success.&#8221;<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>While channel surfing, I came across a horror movie, and the description at the bottom of the screen read: &#8220;Stranded in the countryside, a monstrous scarecrow terrorizes a group of teens.&#8221; This is one of the most common grammar mistakes, and it is called a dangling participle or dangling modifier. The first part of the [&hellip;]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1848,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[10],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-1138","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-writing"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.bly.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1138","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.bly.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.bly.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.bly.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1848"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.bly.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=1138"}],"version-history":[{"count":2,"href":"https:\/\/www.bly.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1138\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":1143,"href":"https:\/\/www.bly.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1138\/revisions\/1143"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.bly.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=1138"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.bly.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=1138"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.bly.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=1138"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}