{"id":1659,"date":"2018-08-21T08:52:55","date_gmt":"2018-08-21T13:52:55","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/www.bly.com\/blog\/?p=1659"},"modified":"2018-08-09T09:07:33","modified_gmt":"2018-08-09T14:07:33","slug":"unbelievable-truth-often-fails-in-sales-copy","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.bly.com\/blog\/direct-marketing\/unbelievable-truth-often-fails-in-sales-copy\/","title":{"rendered":"&#8220;Unbelievable truth&#8221; often fails in sales copy"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Recently I got an email about FN, a successful marketing<br \/>\nconsultant.<\/p>\n<p>In it, FN tells the reader: &#8220;I bill out at $2750 an hour. So in a<br \/>\n40-hour week, I gross $110,000 in fees.&#8221;<\/p>\n<p>Although I know FN casually, and believe him to be ethical, his<br \/>\nclaim of six-figure weekly earnings as a consultant caused me to<br \/>\nraise a skeptical eyebrow.<\/p>\n<p>So I did the math.<\/p>\n<p>If FN works 40 hours a week, well, I don&#8217;t know any consultant<br \/>\nwho will every hour he is in the office.<\/p>\n<p>For many consultants, billable hours comprise only 50% to 60% of<br \/>\nthe time they put in.<\/p>\n<p>The other hours are spent on what is known as &#8220;administrivia.&#8221;<\/p>\n<p>It&#8217;s a catchall term for routine tasks such as reading emails,<br \/>\nhandling paperwork, dealing with staff and vendors, paying taxes,<br \/>\nputting out fires &#8212; most of which they don&#8217;t get paid for.<\/p>\n<p>Also, if FN works 50 weeks a year as a consultant, at $110,000 a<br \/>\nweek, he makes $5.5 million a year &#8212; a claim that raised my<br \/>\nskeptical eyebrow higher while sending my B.S. alarm into red alert.<\/p>\n<p>No doubt FN or his copywriter intend for these facts about his<br \/>\nachievements to build credibility.<\/p>\n<p>But this type of outrageous marketing often repels prospects who<br \/>\nmight otherwise buy &#8212; for two reasons.<\/p>\n<p>First, the claims are so beyond what most readers have ever<br \/>\nachieved, they reject it as false.<\/p>\n<p>Second, many prospects are turned off by brag-and-boast marketing<br \/>\n&#8230; when means you should think twice about doing it, even if all<br \/>\nyou say is true.<\/p>\n<p>One technique to soften the boast and make readers more accepting<br \/>\nof it is to use this phrase from Joe Karbo&#8217;s ad: &#8220;I tell you this<br \/>\nnot to brag, but&#8230;&#8221;<\/p>\n<p>Another is for the superstar to remind the readers that he too<br \/>\ncame from a more humble start. Example: Joe Vitale writes about<br \/>\nonce being homeless.<\/p>\n<p>Bottom line: Even if your incredible claims of wealth and success<br \/>\nbeyond compare are true, you should perhaps tone them down a tad<br \/>\nto avoid making the reader skeptical.<\/p>\n<p>Of course, I may be wrong about this. I often am.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Recently I got an email about FN, a successful marketing consultant. In it, FN tells the reader: &#8220;I bill out at $2750 an hour. So in a 40-hour week, I gross $110,000 in fees.&#8221; Although I know FN casually, and believe him to be ethical, his claim of six-figure weekly earnings as a consultant caused [&hellip;]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1848,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[2],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-1659","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-direct-marketing"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.bly.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1659","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.bly.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.bly.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.bly.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1848"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.bly.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=1659"}],"version-history":[{"count":2,"href":"https:\/\/www.bly.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1659\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":1663,"href":"https:\/\/www.bly.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1659\/revisions\/1663"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.bly.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=1659"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.bly.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=1659"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.bly.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=1659"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}